Eclipse: OOS

OOS=Out of Style. Though, technically, it does have some elements...ah, what the heck.
For 's contest. Which will probably be hated for all of eternity. (The image, I mean, not the contest. XD)
Sorry to finish so late and so...um...ugly. XD I tried to get Eclipse right.
For those curious about who/what Eclipse is, ask RavynCrescent (or see the contest details).
Criticism welcome, as alwys. Preferably constructive and not TOO harsh (which all of those who comment are great with, anyway. XD) Yeah, it sucks, but at least it's a learning experience.
And...yeah.

Programs: Sai (lineart, base color, and shading), Gimp (background and some effects).
Time Taken: @.@ *dies*
Skills Practiced: EVERYTHING. Shading, humans (semi-humanoid, anyway), hair, scales, background, clothing, you name it. Oh, and colored lineart. @.@ WHich is why the robe looks rough, as every one of my classmates pointed out. OMGTOMNYCRITEAKIES!!111!!

Oh, yeah, and that's a blood moon back there, and that large black-ish 'cloud' is Eclipse's wings. I hope it's okay, Ravyn. ^^

FULL VIEW ISH HEALTHY. RAWR.
(Download, for all you out there. XD)